Very interesting.. I love the thing you've added a grain to this photo, this makes it unusual. And the girl is very beautiful.
Also I like the simpisity of this work. Keep on.

wooow, I like the killing looking in the girl, the atmosphere in all this church shots oh and of couse the story beind

Wonderfully done. Beautiful.

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"It’s an age of alienation
Of a downbeat generation
So much for liberation
It looks like rain to me"

I really like this piece a lot. The graininess of it, the high contrast of lights and dark as well as the contrast between the desaturated background and the colored subject. The composition bothers me a bit.... whenever you have a figure looking to one direction, it's usually a good idea to leave more headroom towards the direction they're looking. Perhaps if you panned around a bit and had the empty pews in front of her (with her positioned to the right of the piece), or if you had her in more of a straignt on point of view rather than the 3/4 view, then the pews could still be to the right of her if framed properly.
Overall, this is a moving piece and I hope that you take this criticism constructively. Your model is beautiful and I like the fact that her clothing is such that it could be placed in just about any time period. Thank you for sharing your words and your vision

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Cheers,
Johnny